commentary+on+L1-MELCV12

CJSCV12's comments:
=== IDMCV12's comments: I liked how you made the paper very easy to understand. I think you could have separated 你 & 我to make the page a little easier to read. However, you did forget to show your references, and it seemed like you had a lot of extra space. A little more spacing could fix that. Otherwise I liked it. ===