commentary+on+L5-RCWCV11

Su-Bao-Rou's comments:
Wow! Your project really stands out! I love the bright colors you used to get attention! The title at the top is a great addition and tells a reader what the topic is and also introduces the vocabulary you will be using. I also enjoyed how you threw in a bit of learning focus schools with an essential question to focus the reader's attention. It is also very good that you start off by identifying the difference between the two words and then elaborate. Your creative sort of "warning label" in the yellow box allows us to decide the difference ourselves and helps to make us think. This is important when you want to remember what you have learned. Then underneath when you specifically adress your topic and explain it gives us a bit of extra information to set in the information we have just learned. Your examples at the bottom also show us how to use these words in a sentence. However, in your project I would have done a bit more explanation. Some grammar or sentence structure notes would have been helpful. Overall your project has great information but is a bit too strictly focused, you could have included more information from previous lessons and more grammar usage.

JMWCV11's comments:
I love the contrast between the background and the font, it makes me want to read more. The organization on this paper is great, everything is organized into neat columns and easily located. The essential question is a good addition to your project.