commentary+on+L1-ESLCV12

JICV12's comments:
I liked the organization of your notes; they were very easy to follow and offered a good rundown of the dialogue. This would have been a useful study tool to someone who had missed class. However, more of your personal thoughts could have been included. Additionally, the pīnyīn column's contents lacked tones, which are very important to ones' full understanding of the dialogue. All in all, your notes would have been helpful to anyone who had missed class; they are a good supplement to the textbook and contribute to a greater understanding of Chinese.

SMPCV12's comments:
I like the subject of your project. The table was a great way to help you summerize, and it was easy for me to understand too. Also, I liked how you didn't just have the pinyin or the characters, but that you had both, and what they mean. A helpful hint; I thought that you should've put more of your own input and summary in your project and, you are lacking the self question in your project. Overall I think you did a good job.