commentary+on+L1-PJPCV12

JLRCV12's comments:
I think that you did a good job on including pretty much all of the information you could. Also, the use of tables to organize the information was a good idea. Because of this, it was easy to follow the flow of what you were trying to say. One thing you could work on would be your summary. I think that your summary only covered one part of the information you were trying to cover. I think you could have included more about how you could ask for different things. Another thing I liked was how you put the notes at the bottom of each box. I think this was a good way to include even more information. Overall, I think this is a good project that included a lot of information.

ADSCV12's comments:
You included all of the necessary information. I do not like the font style that much, though. It isn't that easy to read. Next time, try a more normal font like times new roman. It was good for you to put information in tables. They are a great way to organize information. It was good of you to include notes, too. Making notes for yourself is a good notetaking technique. I am confused by your summary, though. You are talking about teacher versus student status and then you go to summarize sentence structure. Ignoring this, it was a good summary. Overall, I feel that you did a good job on your Chinese notetaking project.


 * L1-JAUCV12's comments** - I like how you organized all your information into tables. It made it clear and easy to read. The font style was a good choice since it helps your project look more appealing. The fact that you bolded each topic helped your reader follow the information. Highlighting individual characters was a good idea. You had a lot of information too. Your question was good. For your summary, you didn't really include the whole teacher vs. student concept, but I see why you were writing about grammar rules. Overall, your project was concise and provided the reader with a lot of information.