commentary+on+L5-BJWCV11

CVCHNSC2011's comments:
BJWCV11, your notes are good. I think the layout could use a little work, however. I like the idea of your notes and I think I can imagine how they should appear, but it is not quite there. I think it may have helped to put the text in text boxes so it would be easier to position on the page. Also, try and keep the notes on one page for this project. I do have a few suggestions for increased accuracy of your notes, however. In your first section, I have a little discrepancy with the last part of your definition. Le can only be placed directly after the action verb or after a one-syllable object following the action verb. It cannot be placed at the end of any sentence. In your example sentence, le is placed at the end only because the action verb, 玩, is also at the end of the sentence. Also, in your purple "Notes" section, the sentence "Instead, use mei you....le." is incorrect. Le is not used at all in a past tense negative sentence. Your example Chinese sentence is correct, however. Lastly, in your blue Grammar section, your second and third bullets are confusing. The modifier is related to the object, not the particle le. Also, regarding your first bullet, I think it would be beneficial to point out that in some sentences, if the time word is already describing past tense, le can be omitted. Overall, however, your notes are okay, but they could use some layout changes and accuracy checks. -CVCHNSC2011