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CVCHJMM2011's comments:
Your project is really cool. It is really easy to follow, and it looks really pretty. Like Su-Bao-Rou said the boxes and arrows make your project easy to understand and follow. I also really liked how you put dots next to the words to show what they were instead of just writing the word in color. Sometimes when people do that it is problamatic because you can't read it, but solved that problem. One suggestion that I have is to put examples with your grammar box. I easily understood what was said, but if you put examples it further pushes the point. That is the only negative thing that I have to say, and it really isn't that negative. Another positive is that I absolutly agree on your question. I actually was going to ask 罗老师 that question, but I forgot to. Seeing your question makes me think that we should go further in some of the lessons. There is so much more to learn. Your project is really good, and I really enjoyed looking at it.

Su-Bao-Rou's comments:
Wow, I loved your method of organization. The boxes and arrows make your project very easy to understand and follow. Also the color coding of the parts of speech is very clever. However, I was confused as to why some of the phrases and vocabulary were underlined. Also, the way you organized the sentences and culture alert boxes was slightly difficult to follow, next time the english translation and reference in bullets would be better. I enjoyed how you included other words and uses in the grammar section as well as simple usage. In the vocabulary section under delicious I would have mentioned that 好can be placed in front of other verbs to make ajectives. Overall this was a wonderful project that was creativly organized and easy to follow.