commentary+on+L1-PSSCV12

BJSCV12's comments:
I liked your project but there was a few things that could have been done to make this helpful to a person who does not know as much about Chinese. I think that when using the phrases, the whole meaning of the phrase could be given to make learning more helpful instead of just focusing on one word. Your given information would be easier to understand with a little bit more explanation. Also maybe you could have used a little more color or some other organizing techniques such as tables. Although a few things could have been changed on this wikispace project, it was overall a good project.

===ADHCV12's comments: I liked your project, but you could have some improvements. If you would put the English meaning next to the phrases and sentences it would make your project a lot. Your project would look better with a little more color in it. I learned that lao and shi can be used in more phrases than I thought. Overall I think your project was good that, with the improvements, could be very good.===


 * TMWCV12's comments** As I read through these notes I could see there was not very much information, but the information that was there was helpful. Also, although the notes were clear, there was not very much important information that stood out. As I kept going through, I liked how you put the pinyin under the charecters. What was also bad was that nothing was explained. If I needed these notes for class I would not know what any of the phrases or sentinces meant. Overall you could use more information, but the notes were still helpful.

**CJWCV12's comments:** I am going to be honest, at first I thought this project looked bad. It was very plain, but the highlights looked nice. When I started reading it it had some good information. It would have been helpful if you had had a title or something to outline what you were gonna cover in the notes. The characters under the pinyin are very nice because it is easy to match them up. Overall you had a solid project.


 * L1-JAUCV12's comments** - At first your project looked kind of plain, but you could tell there was a lot of information involved. The highlights help your topics stand out. Your information explained the characters and you provided many examples. Your summarization was alright, although you could have included a picture or something instead of just explaining the character. Your notes could have also been put into a better format. You also might have been able to put in some more information. Overall, I think your project was good and helpful.