commentary+on+L1-BJSCV12

ARSCV12's comments:
Your project is very similar to prewalk worksheets we have done in class. It does not really explain the terms well. For your phrases, they were sentences. There could have been more information because there was very much white space. Haveing colors is a good idea, but maybe choose less vibrant colors next time. I found the colors to be over whelming. It was a fairly nice project.

MCBCV12's comments:
The coloring of your project was very impressive, but at the same time extremely distracting. I found it very hard to focus on the actual information in your project. The tables were a great idea to show your information, but I feel that more info could have been added. I also found a mistake in the number of strokes in the character 您. Spacing could have also been better, because there is a lot of white space on your project. Overall, it is an average-good project.

**CJWCV12's comments:** Wow. Your project is very colorful. At first it seemed cool, but after reading through the whole thing it was a little overwhelming and kind of distracting. The table was nice, but after that I wasn't too impressed. The second table wasn't nearly as good, and I think you could have added more information. Also, you were missing a summary and question. Decent work. **GDKCV12's comments:** You had good information on your project, but I felt that the overwhelming color scheme took away from this. Although bright colors can be good for adding emphasis to key points, it loses its effect when used on the whole project. I think your information was good, but you could have included more in-depth information and extensions from your key topics. I noticed there were no tones on your pinyin; you should have used the Pinyin Editor for those portions. All In all, I think you had a relatively good project, but there are some areas where improvement is needed.


 * MJBCV12's comments:** I really liked the look of your project, but you did not go into much depth with your information. The first table was very neat and organized but it only contained the basic information and you could have made more connections with what you wrote. The second table was also neat but it did not contain much information and only the obvious stuff that we already know. You could have enhanced the project by color-coding the information and going into a lot more depth. You do not have any major mistakes beside having an empty column labeled, "page from book", which contains nothing in it. Also, you could have made the charts a little bigger so you do not have a lot of white empty space at the bottom. Besides those few mistakes and the lack of depth, your project was decent but could have been better with just a little more work put into it.