commentary+on+L1-VAHCV12

EAHCV12's comments:
When I first saw your project it seemed boring to me. But once I read it I realized it was very neat and nice to read. You have very nice facts and pictures of the characters. There wasn't enough color but that was ok because you had bold letter or chacters. I liked it very much.

CDGCV12's comments:
I think your project is very informitive about asking one's surname. The power picture on the right side is cool and looks nice since you scaned your hand drawn picture. Also the culture note at the top raises some interesting questions. Lastly, your project is very informational.


 * L1-JAUCV12's comments** - At first glance, your project seems very organized and stands out because of the picture on the side. You can immediately tell what your project is about judging by what is bolded. Your question was good since you were able to relate it to your own culture. Afterwards, you provided examples that were easy to follow and allowed the reader to see the different ways to ask one's surname. After that I liked how you analyzed the entire sentence by stating each word's definition and part of speech. The power picture to the side was a fantastic idea, especially since you decided to scan it onto your project rather than doing it online. However, I think it could be a little bigger so it would be easier to read. Overall, your project is neat and easy to follow. Great job!