commentary+on+L1-TMWCV12

PSSCV12's comments:
Your Project was done very well and is very organized. The table was a nice idea and made it easy to read the information. Also your project was very strong in the beginning with the big bold characters. The only other thing I suggest is that you have a summary. But otherwise the project was done excellently, and your question was pretty good too.

MJBCV12's comments:
Your project not only contained great material, but was very well organized. Your tables contributed greatly to this, which successfully showed the difference between xing and mingzi. Another great part of your project was how you put a question at the end which summerized everything, just like an essential question. I also liked the culture note you added at the bottom which related to your project. However, one part you could have worked on is adding color/highlighting which would have made it more attractive and also connected different ideas. Besides that, almost every aspect of your project is well done, and is very organized.

**CJWCV12's comments** Overall pretty nice job on your project. It started off good with a clear topic and big bold characters. The table was good because it organized the information good. The second table was less clear though. I found it hard to tell exactly what you were trying to communicate to the reader. The culture note and question at the end were nice though. The only thing you were really missing was a summary. Other than that I feel you did pretty good.

MCBCV12's comments: Your project is very nice and professional looking. The tables are a great way for you to get your information across. I am very impressed by how you showed the information and i would learn a lot from your notes.The culture alert at the end is a good touch. However, and although color is used, I feel that the page could be more attractive by adding more colors or highlighting important information. The first table was also a little hard to read. Overall, this project was done extremely well. Good work!


 * L1-JAUCV12's comments** - I like how you stated a concept at the top and then made the two characters stand out right after that. The table format was a good idea becuase it kept your information clear and organized. Your question was pretty good. Since you're missing a summary I think you might have been able to change around your culture note and make it a summary. Your project has a few minor errors but nothing too drastic. Overall, your project shows that you understand how to ask someone's name which was the point of your notes, so great job.