commentary+on+L1-AJPCV11

JMCCV12's comments:
This is a really great project. It is very neat and colorful. The color is very nice, but it's a bit much. It has wonderful information on it, and it looks to be all right. The whole thing has everything accounted for- from the spacing to the source of which the notes came from- but there could be some more information to go along with it life stroke counts, and orders if you wanted.Also, I notice is that you're missing a good summary, and a question about your topic. But from what I see, it looks great and you can tell you took your time and thought about it long and hard. It is beautiful and has a good amount of information, but a little more wouldn't hurt.

SMPCV12's comments:
**CJWCV12's comments:** At first glance your project looks very appealing. The colors are very attractive. After reading through it though, the color became a little overwhelming and I found it hard to concentrate. The table in the beginning of the notes is nice because it organized the components of the characters and gices you a preview of what we are gonna learn. The information in the body was pretty good, but it would have helped if you had broken it down into sections. Your project was good, but it was missing a summary and the self question.


 * MJBCV12's comments:** Your project is definitely one of the better one's, because of the great information which was in it, but it could be better with just a few minor adjustments. The table in the beginning is helpful but it could contain a lot more information such as: stroke order, stroke count, the radical, and much more. It was nice how you gave an example of how each question particle is used in a sentence, and that you not only gave its english definition but the definition for each character used in it. On the other, the amount of color you used was unnecessary and it was distracting to read with. The spacing also made it very difficult to read, and would have been much better if you had put spaces in between lines, which would have also taken rid of the empty space at the bottom. Overall, your project had good material, but was not very appealing.

MCBCV12's comments: Extremely good job on your project. It is very obvious that you spent a lot of time preparing and working on these notes. The organization and content are exceptional. However, I found that the color that you used was distracting, and the lack of space made the page difficult to read. Nevertheless, you still did a great job.