commentary+on+L1-RSCV10

PAGCV09's comments:
You did a very nice job on the layout and overall presentation of the notes. Your use of color was very effective in both highlighting important information and unifying and organizing content. The notes and explanations were very clear and easy to follow, and example phrases and responses were helpfully provided. Also, the comparisons and distinctions made between the two particles were very relevant to anyone unsure (or needing a refresher) about their usage. Ignoring minor quirks in spacing brought up by another reviewer, which may be a result of some technical issue and easily solved, the only thing which struck me as confusing was the starred note above the questions. (Typo?)

SCSCV12's comments:
I love the color that you used in this project. The red vs. blue really proved the differences between ma and ne. Unfortunately, your whole project could not fit on one page, which is a little bit distracting. I like the organization that you have. It was helpful that you put an expalation of what "and you" means. The colors highlight the important factors of the notes to add to a notebook, and your questions were very intelligent. I too would like to know other question particles, but your question about whether words are pictophonetic or not is not relevant to your topic. Overall, your information was very thourough. Good job!


 * MJBCV12's comments:** Your project is not only very neat, but it gives a lot of helpful information on two very important question particles, me and ne. The use of color was very appropriate because it highlighted all of the important material and it also made it look good. It also helped that you used two different colors to separate what goes under ma, and what goes under ne. The examples are also perfectly laid out, and it helps that you give the pinyin right above each character with the English meaning below the characters. One thing that could have been better though is if you contained all of the information on one page, not two. Overall, I really like your project and besides the page-layout, almost every part of it is perfect.