commentary+on+L1-RMKCV12

GDKCV12's comments:
The page was well organized and contained a good amount of information about the character itself, phrases, and rules for its usage. The examples for the difference between the male and female forms of tā are helpful in distinguishing the difference in radicals as well as meaning. You asked a good question that examines the rules of Chinese grammar and is difficult to answer simply. Although you had a pretty good page layout, you should have highlighted the important parts or made them another color so they would stand out as the key points of your project.

MCBCV12's comments:
Your notes include a lot of useful and important information. However, I think that color could be added to improve your page and make it look more attractive. I am also confused by you starting your notes out with 他 and 她. Judging by your title, I thought the page would only include notes about 也. So, I think that it would have been more helpful to include something like "and how its used in other characters" in your title to be more specific. Nevertheless, your notes are very imformational and would be a great help to someone who missed the class. They include many different topics as well as useful phrases that cover all the criteria needed for a student to understand the usage of 也.


 * MJBCV12's comments**: Your project contained a lot of helpful information and depth, but could have been organized better. I liked how you put multiple topics for ye, and wrote about more than just the obvious and what we learned about in class. The material was very easy to understand, and contains all of the necessary information, but at the same time does not have too much. I am confused on why your title is just **也** when you also talk about 他 and 他 . Also, you could have used color to highlight the important terms/information, which would make it more appealing. Another thing you could have done is to have made the font a little smaller and spaced out, to make it easier to read. But overall, great job!