commentary+on+L1-JAUCV12

VAHCV12's comments:
Your project was very interesting, and I enjoyed reading it. I liked how you underlined important parts with different colors. It made your project very appealing. Also, your information was very organized and detailed. It was helpful that you described each character separately and added phrases to give a better understanding of the characters. After reading your project, one error you made was on punctuation. Make sure you have an open period when you write a sentence, such as in 这 是木. (This is wood.). Overall, I feel that you did a superb job.

KAHCV12's comments:
JAU, I thought this was very nice! The color coding organized it well. Also I liked how you added the radical for every character. Last I liked how you organized it into an outline. These notes are easy to read and understand. Good job!

This is a wonderful project! I love the variety of colors that you used! I like the arrows and usage of technology that you incorporated into this notetaking project. The online version really resembles a nicely organized page from a notebook. You did not have any questions to ask, so you must have been paying good attention when we learned about this topic. Your information covers every aspect of this sentence. Great job!! --L1-SCSCV12