commentary+on+L5-CV201103EJH

Lei-Rui-Ni's comments:
Overall, your notes sheet is really beneficial and visually appealing. You used color very well throughout your note sheet. The title with the purple background was very eye catching and a great way to start off the notes. I really like how you added the stroke order for 一下. I also like how you added the culture alert that had to do with this specific phrase. I wasn’t sure what was going on with the blank section in the notes box, it was very big and plain. Also, one more thing, the word box should be a little bigger because under “use:” when you said: “ modified the __verb__ to make a statement more polite” the word polite was wrapped around to the next line so you couldn’t see it and the sentence didn’t make sense by saying “modified the __verb__ to make a statement more.” Overall, very nice job and its very clear to read!! :)

Brycesite's comments:
Very extensive information and visually appealing project. It was a little hard to read some of the notes in the word boxes because they were too small. I'm not totally sure but I think that you forgot to put a conclusion.(???) I also would have to see that you used more of the textbook to gain even more information. Otherwise you did a great job.