commentary+on+L5-RJSCV11

MAMCV11's comments:
To start off I think you did a great jod with the color. I liked how you did everything associated with xiang3 in blue and everything associated with yao4 in red, it made it very clear what you were talking about and pleasing to look at. Your examples were good but you could have used a few more of them. Your summaries were very concise and to the point, which I thought was a good thing. It is good to know the radical, however, your radical for yao4 was in pinyin so you can't tell which part of the character it is. I think you did a great jod overall.

AGirish's comments:
Your notes are rather short but very concise. Using a table was a good way to organize your information. However, there is still some room for improvement. For pinyin, use the pinyin editor instead of writing the pinyin and then the tone number. It is more professional. Also, it would be more helpful if you had more examples. I noticed one inconsistency in your note taking. For your radicals, one was written as a character while the other was in pinyin. Also, you forgot to quote a sentence from the textbook. Overall, I would consider you project to be a very good one, but not professional.