commentary+on+L1-JWBCV12

PAGCV12's comments:
Your project was very clean and uncluttered in presentation. The breakdown of the characters’ radicals and pronunciations provide useful information on their origins, and the page numbers are provided for reference should someone decide to go back to the textbook for information. However, some changes in layout and font could make things a bit easier to follow by giving the characters in question more emphasis (over the notes on component characters, etc.) and some rearrangement to make the eye flow more intuitively through the arrows (directions imply unintended sequential progressions). Also, some syntactical corrections could be made, but overall the information provided is still helpful.

TMWCV12's comments:
JWBCV12, your notes are fairly good, and they are on a good topic. Overall, they were helpful, but could have used a lot more information. Also there were a few mistakes on your notes in both Chinese and English. The information was limited in many ways. There was little information on grammar and usage. Also some parts could have been explained better. The information was presented clearly but was not very appealing. There could be more color and different sized fonts. If your notes had more information, explanations and more appeal they would be much better


 * MJBCV12's comments:** Overall, you did a great job in summarizing, and putting in all the key components such as radicals, examples, and pinyin. The information that you put in was very helpful, because it not only says what the stuff means, but why it is like that (like what the radicals actually mean). Although the material that you did put on the page was great, you could have added a lot more of it, because ma and ne have a lot of different aspects to them. You could have also used color to highlight what you believe are the most important parts to the question particles. The look of the page was also somewhat boring, and could have been "spiced" up a bit. Great job though!