commentary+on+L5-AWRCV11

BryceSite's comments: You had really good information but you shouldn't of put your name as a footer (Luo laoshi said not to include our names). It is also supposed to only be one page long. Although you did not go over by much you could have prevented this by making the font smaller and deleting the footer. Otherwise, good job! :]

Shonens' comments: Well, i like very much how you included information on each. You explained each character correctly and i found it quite informative. the only backset i could find to this paper is the formating. if you tabed or re-organized it a bit better it would be easyer to read and be a great study tool