commentary+on+L1-JSICV12

MJBCV12's comments:
Overall, your project was mediocre, and could have been better with just a little more work put into it. It could have been better organized, and would have been more appealing if you put all of the information on only one page, instead of two. On the other hand, I like the way you show the power picture, which shows the way you remember l ǎ o. Another great feature your project has is that it shows the story of how peng came to be a chinese character. One thing you could have improved upon though is to have put more graphics in it, and more color which, if used properly, would have gave the reader's a better understanding of the topic. In summary, the project contained some good notes but the overall look of the project was unatractive and could have been much better.