commentary+on+L1-MBVCV12

RMKCV12's comments:
First things first- you forgot not to put your name on it. Aftegetting through that part it does give a great description on some standard greetings in chinese. I like how you gave the chinese, then the straight english translation, and then the the way an english speaking person would say it. This made it very easy to follow it and understand it. I also like the way you broke it down into different types greetings. This also makes it easier to follow. I think that you did a great job on this project.

VAHCV12's comments:
After reading this, I had a much better understanding about greeting someone in Chinese. I loved how everything was organized and easy to follow. Also, I found it helpful that you listed alternative ways to greet a person. Although it was very organized and helpful, you were missing punctuations at the end of your sentences, and you did not include a summary. Along with this, you could have added more information to explain your topic. Overall, you did a fantastic job but with a few minor errors. 


 * L1-JAUCV12's comments** - Your outline format was good and helped keep everything organized. I like how you cited your bibliography. Your information helped me understand how I should greet any person I meet. Your question was pretty good, although you didn't provide a summary. Your notes could have probably been even easier to follow if you had color coded or spaced them out a little. Except for the fact that your name's at the top, your project looks very good.


 * MJBCV12's comments:** Overall, this is a decent project that contains a lot of information but also could have been summarized better. The outline format keeps the page organized and also shows each of the different topics, which was very helpful to me. I definitely learned a lot while reading yours and it helped me "polish up" on my chinese greeting skills. However, you could have integrated color into the project to make it more appealing. Also, you could have spaced out the information better by increasing the font, which would have prevented the page to appear incomplete. Finally, you could have added a question at the end which would have summarized the material, just like an essential question. Besides these few areas, I truly enjoyed reading your project and I learned a lot because of it.